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When Your Characters Won’t Behave

by Ryan Lanz (originally posted on

Have you ever thought to yourself that your characters are in charge, and not you?

I once heard an interview where an author discussed his characters as if they were the ones with the quill in hand, so to speak. He went on to discuss how the characters would occasionally hijack the story and move it where they felt like. He’s not the first to discuss it this way.

To be honest, when I first heard that, I thought it was absolutely ridiculous. The characters are the clay; they are the entities being created. They have no control or power.

Truthfully, I still feel that way, but at least now I have an understanding of what they were referring to. When people talk about the characters grabbing control of the plot, they really mean (or should mean) something else. The characters aren’t grabbing control, it’s probably the writer trying to put something where it doesn’t fit.

When we create these characters, we instill in them things like goals, aspirations, quirks, personality traits, ambitions, and fears. If we create these facets strongly enough, it will stick with us for the rest of the book/story. Now, imagine that we try to make the characters do something that is out of context with the fabric of their make-up (that is, without proper set-up or foreshadowing). What will happen? Our own creative mind will nag at us. That is often taken in the form of the characters trying to wrestle back their more appropriate actions within the plot.

I contend that it’s not the characters doing anything. It’s when you try to pull something that doesn’t quite fit. Why might you do this? Perhaps because you’re stuck in the plot, and you need the character to do something that doesn’t feel right in order to get un-stuck. That’s lazy writing at the sacrifice of your characters. No wonder they “rebel.”

If my characters had actual cognizant thoughts, they would plainly understand who is in control of the story. The late Robert Jordan (an amazing writer) once said, “I created these characters, and I am an Old Testament God with my fist in the middle of their lives.” I wholeheartedly agree when it comes to my own writing. The characters don’t wrestle away anything. They’re just along for the ride.

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